Thursday, April 11, 2013

Revised Rogerian Argument (Essay 2)


Allie Cuccoli
ENGL 102-039
Rogerian Argument Essay
20 March 2013
Standardized Test: The Useless Tool
Junior and senior year are the most stressful years of high school students’ careers.  Not only are students juggling college tours, sport activities, extra curricular all while maintain a collegiate-acceptable grade point average, students must also cope with the stress of taking numerous standardized tests, specifically the SAT and the ACT. The majority of American students have to take both the SAT and the ACT in in order to complete their college applications; with out those scores, many colleges will not accept applications. Admission councilors place a heavy emphasis on SATs and ACTs because they believe the tests will accurately predict how well a student will succeed in their college careers.  Recently, the debates regarding whether or not admission councilors should heavily depend on the tests to predict a student’s success at college have become more prevalent in today’s academic society. Increasing evidence that standardized testing inaccurately portrays a student’s academic ability is contradicting the traditionally held belief that standardized tests give valid insight into students future achievement.  Therefore, college admission offices should embrace the test-optional practice; students should be given the choice to submit or exclude their standardized test scores when completing their college applications.  If an applicant does decide to include his test scores in his application, admission councilors should only use the scores to further enhance the applicant’s high school transcripts because transcripts are more accurate in predicting future achievement than standardized tests.
Some people, such as college professors, admission councilors, test-makers and educators believe that standardized tests are useful for determining a student's intellectual and academic level.  These supporters of standardized testing advocate that colleges and schools should use these tests to evaluate their students.  Thus, these tests should be taken into great consideration when admission councilors are reviewing college applications.  According to Richard Phelps, Ph.D., standardized tests are reliable and good measures of student achievement; standardized tests avoid teacher bias as well as bias and subjectivity when the tests are graded (“Estimating the Costs”).  Therefore, it is understandable as to why standardized testing is still seen to be a great indicator of a student’s future academic success.
On the other hand, many people believe standardized tests are beginning to loose the credibility of being accurate predictors of achievement in college and in the future. The SAT and ACT misrepresent the intellectual and academic capabilities of men and women.  According to Phyllis Rosser, there is a considerable amount of evidence from studies documenting how women receive higher grade averages than men in every course they take in high school and college; however, women’s scores on the SAT have been 50 to 60 points lower than men’s scores since 1967 (“Standardized Testing”).  The SAT is supposed to predict how well all students will succeed in a university, regardless of a student’s gender. Forms of standardized testing are supposed to give college admission councilors a relatively accurate prediction of the grades an applicant would receive in a college course. Rosser continues in her article saying the Education Testing service conducted a study in 1991 that showed how the SAT “under predicts women’s college math grades at every level” (Standardized Testing”).  Due to the fact that the test does not give accurate insight into future success of students based on gender, admission councilors are receiving an inaccurate prediction of an applicant’s possible grades in college courses.  In addition to the misrepresentation of collegiate success of the men and women, standardized tests falsely predict the academic achievement of students with different ethnic backgrounds.  According to Rosser, students of varying ethnicities have lower test scores than Caucasians as a result or poor quality preparation and language barriers (“Standardized Testing”).  The SAT and ACT assess a student’s understanding of the English language.  If a foreign or ethnic student does not know English as extensively as a native speaker, that student is already at a severe disadvantage, and is more likely to receive a poor score as a result.  However, an English second-language student could be equally as intelligent and successful as a native speaker, yet admission councilors will only see a low score, indicating that the student will supposedly do poorly in college.
Academic transcripts serve as a better too to evaluate a student’s academic capabilities and to get an idea as to how well a student will do in their college career. 
According the essay, “The Rise and Demise of the SAT:  The University of California Generates Change for College Admissions,” the University of California admissions office realized that an applicant’s high school curriculum and resulting grades are the best indicators of the student’s success in college.  For example, if a student excelled in A.P. courses and honors courses, then the student will most likely have great success at college because he or she is well prepared, mentally and academically; the student will know what work load to expect from a college-level course, and they have an adequate, or superior amount of knowledge and intelligence that will enable them to thrive in his or her academics.  Therefore, secondary education teachers should focus more attention on providing their students with the knowledge of the subjects so that they will be able to use it in their college education experience.  According to Diana Payne, standardized tests “may measure the academic strengths and weaknesses to some degree, but they won't serve as a remedy to all the instructional time lost preparing students just for those tests, nothing else” (“Too Much Emphasis”).  Due to the fact that academic transcripts are becoming the more accurate tool in calculating a student’s success, it is essential that educators spend quality time ensuring their students are achieving academic success in their course in high school, rather than wasting time preparing for an inaccurate test.
            Students, universities, and admission councilors would benefit if SATs and ACTs were no longer required on college applications.  First, the students themselves would avail because they would not be evaluated based on their test taking skills; instead, they would be evaluated solely on their knowledge of subjects as well as their extra-curricular activities that enhance their individuality.  Also, they would be relieved of stress and pressure knowing that their character is not being assessed by an inaccurate, complicated test. Also, they will not feel the pressure from parents and schools to receive high scores on the tests.  Colleges would also receive more applicants, because the applicants would feel more confident in their chances of getting into a school due to their academic knowledge, not due to basic test taking skills. Lastly, as a result of admission officers relying solely on an applicant’s academic achievement in high school and their extra-curricular activities, councilors will fill their school with worthy students who are willing and able to handle the college’s academic level and course load, rather than filling the school with students who are merely very skillful in the art of test taking. 
            However, it is unlikely that the SAT and ACT and other forms of standardized testing will be completely disregarded during the college application process.  Therefore, it would be more likely and ideal that all college admission councilors give applicants the option to include or exclude all of their standardized test scores; if the scores are provided, they should be looked at as to only support the grades on the high school transcripts and the other aspects of the application that make a student stand out among the rest of the applicants. Universities are beginning to place a higher emphasis on aspects that make students standout as exemplary individuals rather than their not-so unique skills of test taking. In fact, more than 800 colleges and universities no longer require the SAT and more applicants are being asked to write personalized essays (“More Schools”).  Many schools are test optional, meaning submitting standardized test scores is not required; Even if a school is test optional, an applicant may still submit their score if he believes it will only benefit him.  There are many examples of schools that are test optional such as the University of California; if an applicant does submit a score, it is only used to back-up the high school transcript (Berger).  If students believe that they would benefit from taking a standardized test and then submitting their test scores, then they should be allowed to have that option, as well as the option to decide against doing so.
            Standardized testing is becoming outdated and colleges are realizing that the tests give invalid predictions about the future success of applicants. However, no one will completely disregard the SAT and the ACT because college admission offices have relied on the tests for so long.  Although the ideal situation would be that standardized test scores would never be used to evaluate students’ academic abilities, it is more likely that colleges will become test-optional.  By embracing this new, trending practice, colleges would be assessing students via more accurate methods, such as analyzing high school transcripts, extra curricular activities, student essays, and teacher recommendations.  Thus, test-optional colleges would provide students with a better and more equal chance of college acceptance based on their academic and extra-curricular success, not on their ability to take tests.

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Revised Causal Argument (Essay 1)


Allie Cuccoli
ENGL 102-039
Causal Argument Essay
28 January 2013
Technology the Inhibitor: The Downfall of Human Interaction.
It seems that a majority of the American population are proud owners of a fancy piece of technology.  Walking around places such as Boston, or on a college campus, individuals are seen to be engulfed in their iPads, laptops, or smart phones.  Over the last few years, this observation has become increasingly apparent wherever one goes.  However, what have become less noticeable are physical and verbal interactions when people are surrounded by their peers.  In social settings, individuals fail to start conversations with those surrounding them, and instead they opt to communicate with the world via technology.  Due to the improvements being made in technology and the increasing usage of these gadgets and the Internet, people have become less social; as a result of these causes, society is impeded from forming strong social connections and relationships between one another on physical, intimate and emotional levels because of a disconnect from the physical world.
In order to form solid relationships, individuals must be actively engaged in their environment, and in the here and now.  It is much easier to meet new people, and maintain conversation with another person when the phone is tucked away.  The new digital tools are rather distracting and take people’s attention away from things that matter.  For example, in the article, “Your Life is Fully Mobile,” a survey conducted by Time reported that “48% said they spend too much time looking at their mobile device and not observing the world” (Gibbs).  Also, according to Angela Moscaritolo, a study conducted on data usage, such as data used to access the internet, or using apps that require a wireless connection, reported that data usage has risen dramatically in the United Kingdom, which indicates, “smartphone users are growing increasingly reliant on their mobile devices.” People are spending too much of their time honed in to their electronic devices, thus they are not immersing themselves in the surrounding environment. The first step to establish physical social connections is for people to become aware of their surroundings and realize what is transpiring around them in that moment.  However, people are so enamored by their phones and using them so frequently, it has practically become an addiction that inhibits people from functioning socially with others around us.  Another shocking statistic from the Gibb’s survey is that 17 percent of the participants said that they “check their phone at every meal regardless of who they are with” (“Your Life”).  Rather than socializing with those around them, people are more engaged in their conversations online than the conversations they could be having in the physical world.
            Along with this increasing dependence on smartphones and other digital tools to communicate with, there has been steadily increasing amounts of people using the Internet and  a huge variety of apps to access Facebook and other social networking websites to establish and maintain relationships. However, these websites are preventing members of society from forming intimate bonds with one another.  According to the article, “Me and my 400 Friends: The Anatomy of College Students’ Facebook Networks, Their Communication Patterns and Well Being,” intimacy is defined as “disclosure of private information requiring high levels of trust and confidentiality between partners” (Mango, Taylor and Greenfield).  Furthermore, intimate relationships are crucial in maintaining individual and overall well-being (Mango, Taylor and Greenfield).  Facebook and similar websites may offer more chances to meet new people online, however these sites allow for the creation of short-lived, meaningless friendships and relationships.  According to the previously mentioned article, a study that was conducted produced the theory that “technology, like urbanization, will enable manifold instrumental relationships with relative strangers or superficial acquaintances” (Mango, Taylor and Greenfield).  Online social networking sites are a product of the ever improving technological progress we are experiencing, however, these sites are impeding peoples’ abilities to form close friendships or relationships with significant emotional connections.  In the article “Electronic Intimacy,” Rosen discusses the results of a meta-analysis of online dating.  According to the study, “people become cognitively overwhelmed when they search through hundreds of dating profiles.  To cope they ‘must objectify’ the people they are sizing up for some sort of emotional connection” (Rosen).  Society has easy access to the Internet via phones, thus people can easily connect with other cyber users; however the best connections that occur are those formed through physical confrontation.
On the other hand, some may argue that technology has improved society’s ability to stay connected with others even if thousands of miles separate individuals from one another.  According to an article written by Gibbs, “in a poll conducted by Time Magazine, 73% of civilians in India said they feel more connected with their families, which was 21 points above the national average” (“Your Life”).  Due to the vast amount of technological improvements, people are saying that they feel more connected to peers and family members who are distant. 
Although there are certainly more means of communication, these methods decrease the likelihood of forming meaningful and intimate relationships because there is no face–to-face contact with these new ways of reaching out to others. Face to face contact is vital when forming and maintaining a strong relationship with other individuals.   Therefore, through such contact, it is possible to accurately interpret the tone of their voice, their body language and their eye contact in order to determine the strength of the relationship. Furthermore, it is more sensible to convey the true meaning of one’s message via confrontation than via text messaging, Facebook chat or email; it is easier to understand the message because one can pick up on social cues through face-to-face communication.  However, technology acts as a barrier for this process to occur; it enables the user to hide behind a shield that prevents the true underlying message from being understood. In an article by Reich et al., studies have shown that interacting online with friends limits opportunities for face-to-face contact (“Friending”).  Physical contact is the most crucial step in forming bonds of intimacy and trust in relationships, whether or not such contact is a familial, friendly or romantic relationship. Furthermore, it is a lot easier to convey messages in person rather than via text messaging, Facebook chat or email.  Without physical confrontation, communication is ineffective.
At first technology may seem as though it is improving the way members in our society communicate with one another, however it is preventing us from creating enduring, confidential and intimate relationships.  Smartphones, and other similar electronic devices are constantly being updated so that we can access our emails, and communicate faster with our peers.  People have immersed themselves in their devices so much that they have become overly reliant on them.  This dependency is serving as a distractor; people focus their time and attention on what is occurring in the digital world on their devices rather than concentrating their attention on the physical world, where the real people are located.  As a result of the improvement in technology, the Internet has become the home of famous and useful social networking sites.  Although these sites seem to connect the world efficiently and enable better communication, the emotional connections that solidify relationships are lost because of the lack of physical confrontation.  It is time for people in our society to look up from their cellphones, put them away and say the words, “Hi there, how are you?” rather than texting the impersonal “hey! :)”

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